Love the melodic flow of "Memorialized in poignant rainbows"and the train of thought both preceding and following it. Also, powerful comparison to a tombstone.
Groan,just painfully bad.
Great usage of metaphor and I love your philosophical stance on a picture prompt. Nice work.
Good flow, good word choices.
...marking man's everyday existence...love esp. this line - hits the nail perfectly - good flow as well...
nice...you capture the essence of graffiti at its best...
Great flow to this piece "Tombstones marking man's everyday existenceIn fleeting, flickering glimpses"Really loved this imagery from the prompt. Beautifully carried! ~ Rose
fleeting, flickering glimpse of heart and soulThese words captured the spirit of graffiti for me...thanks.♥
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